In class we had to make a storyboard based round a stimulus we got given by our teacher. The
stimulus I recieved, was the movie Taken. We had template of a story board we had to fill in by drawings of different camera shots and angles. We done the key scenes of the film as we thought these would be most effective and creative for us to make. After we filmed the story boards, we got a camera and acted out each scene we drew on the storyboard using the camera shots and angles.
Alter phrasing from "My stimulus I got" to "The stimulus I was given". Instead of "We done" put "We filmed" or "We shot". Make sure you check to see if your writing is formal enough.
ReplyDelete"After we done" to "After we completed".